When looking back at our film we decided we didn't like certain aspects of it. For example we didn't like the order of the footage we thought that it seemed too simplistic so we decided to film some more footage and change the order.
We decided to film some more close up shots in the darkroom and we wanted to film some shots that almost make the audience anticipate what is going to happen. You can seen this when the shots include the stop solution, this can be seen in a couple of shots in the opening. We really like the effect that this creates. We also changed the order of the opening by breaking the park scene up into pieces and merging them with the darkroom scenes to make it seem like they are flashbacks which makes the storyline easier to understand and follow. We also filmed a point of view shot of the girl being killed and falling to the floor we thought this would be really effective because we have the idea of slowing it down and putting it just before the title which when we put it together seemed to run really smoothly.
We also changed the font our title was in because we decided that the old font didn't really match our film the way we wanted it to, by changing it the title is now much clearer and simplistic which matches the credits.
